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Chapter 9: What the Police Found

Detective Renata Flores was not what I expected.

She was younger than me by at least a decade, with a calm, methodical manner and the habit of writing everything down in a small notebook before she said anything in response.

She watched the video from the mall.

She read the email chain from Evelyn's folder.

She looked at the photographs of me in the parking lots and the school pickup line.

Then she wrote something in her notebook.

"Mrs.

Vance," she said, "I want to make sure I understand the full timeline.

Your mother-in-law has been building a file on you for approximately eighteen months.

She arranged for a third party to enter your home using access she obtained deceptively.

She directed him to remove specific documents to prevent you from contesting a property sale.

And you received a threatening phone call from an unknown creditor who referenced your daughter's school."

"Yes," I said.

"And your husband is here voluntarily."

David, sitting beside me, said, "Yes."

"Mr.

Vance, at what point did you become aware that your mother intended to have someone enter the property?"

"I didn't," David said.

"I knew she wanted to sell the house.

I didn't know she had arranged entry.

I came back that morning because she called me at 7:20 and told me to come home, that there was something I needed to see.

She didn't tell me what.

When I arrived, Hannah was already in the hallway."

Detective Flores wrote this down.

"The man who entered your home," she said.

"Marcus Teel.

We know him.

He does property retrieval work — sometimes legal, sometimes not.

He's been cooperative in past cases when he understood his exposure." She looked at me.

"The contact information he left was real.

That tells me he knew he was in a bad position."

"Will he cooperate?" Patricia asked.

She was seated to my left, a leather portfolio open on her knee.

"He'll be interviewed today.

If he confirms the arrangement with Evelyn Vance, that's your conspiracy charge." Detective Flores turned a page in her notebook.

"The creditor call is more complicated.

Threatening a minor is serious, but we need to identify who made the call.

Do you still have the number?"

"Unknown," David said.

"It didn't display."

"We can subpoena the carrier records with the timestamp.

That takes time." She looked at us both.

"I want to be honest with you.

Evelyn Vance leaving with a suitcase this morning complicates the arrest timeline.

We'll issue a request to locate, but if she's left the state, it becomes a longer process."

"She has a sister in Phoenix," David said.

"And a college friend in Savannah."

"We'll follow up on both." Detective Flores closed her notebook.

"In the meantime, I'd recommend you change your alarm code, vary your daughter's routine, and avoid the property alone until we've spoken to Teel and have a clearer picture of the creditor situation."

We left the station at just after noon.

In the parking lot, David stopped walking.

"Hannah."

I turned.

"I know this isn't enough," he said.

"I know sorry isn't enough right now.

But I need you to know that I am on your side.

Completely.

Whatever it costs."

I looked at him for a long moment.

"I know," I said.

"I believe you."

"But?"

"But I need time.

I need to get through this first and then figure out what we are on the other side of it."

He nodded.

He didn't push.

We drove separately back to my sister's house, where Chloe was waiting with a finished puzzle and a request for grilled cheese.

I made it.

David sat at the table across from her and helped her start a new puzzle while I stood at the stove and listened to them talk about whether a dog would be better than a cat.

It was the most normal twenty minutes of a completely abnormal day.

My phone buzzed.

Patricia.

*Teel confirmed everything.

Signed a statement an hour ago.

Warrant for Evelyn is being processed.

She was located at a hotel in Phoenix.

She hasn't left the country.*

I set the phone face down on the counter.

"Mom?" Chloe called.

"Do you want the corner pieces?

I saved them for you."

May you like

"Yes," I said.

"I'll be right there."

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