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Chapter 10: The Last Thing She Tried

The capacity assessment Sera commissioned was scheduled for the following Tuesday.

The independent evaluator arrived at the mansion at ten in the morning — a woman in her sixties, efficient and neutral, with the manner of someone who had seen this kind of family dispute many times and had no interest in being anyone's instrument.

Gideon had called her the night before.

Not to interfere.

To inform.

He told her that a full set of documented medical records, physician notes, medication logs, and witnessed care assessments had been filed with the solicitor's office, all dated and signed, covering the past eight months of his father's care.

He told her that the signing physician had submitted a formal statement of capacity dated the same day as the will amendment.

He told her that two independent witnesses had been present at the signing.

He told her she was welcome to conduct her assessment.

He would not stand in the way of it.

She thanked him and said she appreciated the transparency.

Sera did not know about the call.

She had prepared for the assessment the way she prepared for everything — thoroughly, precisely, with a folder of her own that she carried into the sitting room where the evaluator waited.

I saw her go in.

I saw the folder.

I saw the way she set it on the table with the careful confidence of someone who believed they were holding the winning hand.

I was in the corridor outside Renaldo's room when she came out forty minutes later.

She walked past me without speaking.

Her folder was still under her arm, but something in the way she carried it had changed.

It was no longer an instrument.

It was just paper.

I went in to check on Renaldo.

He was sitting up in bed — he had been discharged from the hospital two days prior, with strict instructions and a modified medication schedule I had already implemented.

His color was better.

His eyes were sharp.

"She didn't get what she came for," he said, before I had closed the door.

"No."

"Good." He adjusted the blanket on his lap.

"The evaluator asked me to count backwards from one hundred by sevens.

I got to two." He paused.

"Then I told her about the fishing trip in Scotland.

In detail.

She seemed to enjoy it."

"I'm sure she did."

"She also asked me why I changed my will." He looked at the window.

"I told her the truth.

That I had become aware that my daughter had been using her position as trust administrator to remove caregivers from my home, and that I had lost confidence in her judgment regarding my welfare." He folded his hands.

"I told her I had not been influenced by anyone.

I had been watching for three years."

My throat tightened.

"Did she ask about me?"

"She asked if any caregiver had encouraged me to make changes to my estate." He looked at me steadily.

"I told her that my nurse had never once discussed my will, my finances, or my estate with me.

That she had discussed my cardiac medication, my blood pressure, my sleep schedule, and a fishing trip in 1987." He paused.

"I told her that was exactly what I needed from a nurse."

I sat down in the chair beside his bed.

"Renaldo," I said.

"Don't," he said gently.

"Don't thank me for telling the truth."

I pressed my lips together and nodded.

He picked up his book.

"Sera will try one more thing," he said, without looking up.

"She always does.

She doesn't know how to stop at the moment when stopping would still be dignified." He turned a page.

"Whatever it is, Gideon will handle it.

And you will be fine."

He said it with the certainty of a man who had decided it was true.

Three hours later, Sera tried one more thing.

She came to my room.

She knocked, which surprised me.

I opened the door and she stood in the corridor in a different coat — dark this time, already buttoned — with her bag on her shoulder and the look of someone who had made a decision and was not going to unmake it.

"I'm leaving," she said.

"All right."

"I'm going to stay at the London flat for a while." She looked past me into the room, then back.

"I want you to know that I intend to pursue the legal challenge.

That hasn't changed."

"I understand."

"But I also want you to know—" She stopped.

Something crossed her face that I hadn't seen before.

Not quite regret.

Something adjacent to it.

"I wasn't trying to hurt him.

My father.

I want you to understand that."

I looked at her.

"You put oil on a staircase that I used every morning," I said.

"You kept a notebook with eight nurses' names in it.

You hired a solicitor to argue that your father isn't competent to make his own decisions." I paused.

"What were you trying to do, if not hurt someone?"

Her jaw moved.

"Protect what's ours," she said.

"It was never yours to protect," I said.

"It was his."

She held my gaze for a long moment.

Then she said: "He was all I had left, after our mother.

This house.

This family.

I couldn't—" She stopped again.

Pressed her hand flat against the doorframe.

"I couldn't watch it be taken."

"Nothing was being taken," I said.

"He was being cared for."

She didn't answer.

She picked up her bag more firmly.

"The legal challenge stands," she said.

"I want to be clear about that."

"I know."

She turned and walked down the corridor.

At the top of the main staircase, she stopped.

"You're better than the others," she said, without turning around.

"I'll give you that.

The others were easier to move." She paused.

"I underestimated you."

She went down the stairs.

May you like

I stood in the doorway and listened to her footsteps cross the entrance hall, heard the front door open, heard it close.

Then I went to find Gideon.

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