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Chapter 3: What the Deed Said

I set the phone down on the kitchen table without ending the call.

Lorraine was still talking.

I could hear her voice coming through the speaker, thin and distant, like a radio signal losing its tower.

Kevin said something in the background.

His mother answered him.

I picked the phone back up.

"Say that again," I said.

"Mom, just — don't do anything else yet.

Please.

There's something about the deed that you need to hear from us first."

"I have the deed, Lorraine.

I have every document.

I have the originals."

"I know you think that." Her voice dropped.

"But Kevin found something.

Last spring.

When we were refinancing the car and the bank ran a title search on your assets — they flagged the lake house."

My hand tightened around the phone.

"Flagged it how."

A pause.

Kevin's voice again, closer now.

Then Lorraine came back.

"There's a second name on the property record.

It was added in 2019.

We didn't know how to tell you."

The kitchen was very quiet.

The refrigerator hummed.

A car passed outside.

"Whose name," I said.

Another pause.

Longer this time.

"Kevin's father.

Gerald."

I sat down.

I did not remember sitting down, but I was sitting, the phone still at my ear, the blue folder open in front of me.

I looked at the deed copy I had pulled from it two weeks ago.

Dorothy May Hastings.

That was all I had ever seen.

That was all I had ever checked.

"That's not possible," I said.

"Mom—"

"I never signed anything with Gerald's name on it.

I never agreed to that."

"We know." Lorraine's voice was quieter now.

Careful.

"That's why we didn't know how to tell you.

Kevin asked his father about it and Gerald said you had agreed verbally.

That you'd discussed it one summer and shook hands and that was enough."

"A handshake." My voice came out flat.

"For a property deed."

"Gerald said you were grateful for everything his family had done — helping with repairs, the dock replacement, the new roof—"

"I paid for the roof." I opened the folder and pulled out the contractor receipt.

August 2020.

Dorothy M.

Hastings.

Paid in full.

"I have the check.

I have the receipt.

I paid for every repair on that property."

"Mom, I believe you."

"Do you?" I said.

"Because you called me to tell me to stop.

Not to warn me.

Not to help me.

You called me to slow me down."

Silence.

"That's not fair," Lorraine said.

"The voicemail wasn't fair either."

Kevin's voice came through sharp and close, like he had taken the phone.

"Dorothy.

Gerald is willing to sit down and discuss this like adults.

He has documentation too.

Before you finalize anything with those buyers, you need to hear what he has to say."

I looked at Samuel's sketch on the table.

The careful lines of the porch.

The small square of the dock.

His handwriting in the margin: *For Dorothy.

Always.*

"Put Gerald on the phone," I said.

Another pause.

Shuffling.

Then a voice I had heard at Thanksgiving tables and birthday dinners for eleven years.

Smooth.

Measured.

The voice of a man who had never once been told no by anyone who mattered to him.

"Dorothy," Gerald said.

"I'm glad we're finally talking."

"Tell me about the deed," I said.

"It's simple," he said.

"You were struggling after Samuel passed.

We helped.

The dock alone was forty thousand dollars.

We never asked for repayment.

We asked for recognition.

A shared interest.

You agreed."

"I never agreed to anything."

"You shook my hand."

"I shook your hand at Christmas dinner," I said.

"That was not a contract."

"In Georgia, a verbal agreement between parties with shared interest in a property can carry legal weight.

My attorney has already reviewed the situation."

My chest went cold.

"You already have an attorney."

"I've had one since March," Gerald said.

"When we realized you might do something rash."

The young couple was still on the porch.

I could hear the realtor's voice through the open line, muffled, asking Lorraine something.

The cooler lid opening and closing.

One of the grandchildren asking for a drink.

"Gerald," I said.

"I want you to listen to me very carefully."

"Of course."

"I built that house.

I paid for that house.

My name — and only my name — is on the original deed filed with the Greene County recorder's office in 2017.

Whatever document you're holding was not signed by me."

A beat.

"That's a serious accusation," Gerald said.

"Yes," I said.

"It is."

The line went quiet for three full seconds.

Then Gerald said, very calmly: "Dorothy, I think you should speak with your attorney before you say anything else.

Because if this goes where you're pointing it, it won't just be the house you lose."

The call ended.

I sat at the kitchen table with the dead phone in my hand and the folder open in front of me, and I thought about what Gerald had just said.

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*It won't just be the house you lose.*

I picked up my phone again and called my attorney.

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