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Chapter 5: Raymond's Other Business

I read Marcus's letter to me that night after Warren left.

It was four pages, handwritten, dated eight days before his final deployment.

I will not repeat what it said.

Some things belong only to the people they were written for.

But by the third page, I understood why he had flagged Raymond.

And by the fourth, I understood why he had written a separate letter to Harrison.

Marcus had known something.

He had not been certain enough to act on it.

So he had done what he always did — he had documented it, sealed it, and trusted that the right moment would come.

I called Warren at six the next morning.

"Tell me everything Marcus gave you about Raymond."

"I was hoping you'd say that." I heard him open something — a folder, maybe.

"Raymond Cahill.

Forty-one.

Finance.

On paper, he runs a mid-size investment advisory firm out of Connecticut.

Registered, licensed, compliant on the surface.

But Marcus noticed something eighteen months ago when he was reviewing his own estate documents.

Raymond had approached a JAG officer — not Marcus's JAG officer, a different one — asking about the process for contesting a military spouse's beneficiary designation."

I sat very still.

"He was asking before Marcus was gone," I said.

"Fourteen months before," Warren said.

"Marcus couldn't prove intent.

But he noted it.

And then three months later, Raymond incorporated a second company.

Shell structure, registered in Delaware.

One of the named directors is a man with two prior fraud convictions in Florida."

"Does Victoria know?"

Warren was quiet for a beat too long.

"That's the part I'm not sure about," he said.

I thought about Victoria's text.

*Not about the money.

About Marcus.*

"I need to meet with her," I said.

"Alone.

Before Raymond knows it's happening."

"That may already be difficult.

The PI he hired — I identified him last night.

He's local.

He'll be watching the hotel."

I looked at the window.

Fourth floor.

Bare trees.

A parking lot below.

"Then I won't leave through the front," I said.

Warren made a sound that might have been a laugh.

"I forget sometimes who I'm talking to."

I was in Victoria's car by eight-fifteen.

She had parked two blocks from the hotel on a side street, engine running, hands wrapped around a paper coffee cup.

She looked like she hadn't slept.

I got in and closed the door.

"How did you know I'd come?" she asked.

"Because you texted from your secondary number and said it wasn't about the money.

That meant it was about something worse."

She stared through the windshield.

A long time passed.

"Raymond asked me to marry him six weeks after Marcus was flagged overseas," she said.

"I didn't know that then.

I didn't know about the timing until last night, when I found something in his office."

She reached into her coat pocket and placed a folded document on the console between us.

I opened it.

It was a legal brief — a draft, not filed.

Dated four months ago.

It outlined a challenge to Marcus's estate on the grounds of mental incapacity at the time of signing.

It named me as the respondent.

It named Raymond as the interested party representing the family.

At the bottom, in the signature block, was Victoria's name.

Her signature was not there.

The line was blank.

"He printed it and left it in a folder he thought I wouldn't open," she said.

Her voice was steady in the way that voices get when someone has already done all their crying.

"He was waiting for the estate to be confirmed before he filed it.

He needed the number first."

I folded the document and put it in my coat.

"Victoria," I said.

"Did you sign anything for Raymond in the last year?

Anything at all — power of attorney, financial authorization, anything with your name on it?"

May you like

She turned to look at me for the first time.

The answer was on her face before she said a word.

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